Works for me! Roll one die with the extended Crit range, and add it to whatever successes Dr. Simpson gets.
So, a quick note here Roger. A “Focus” and a “Talent” behave very differently for tests. You have the Talent “I Know My Ship,” not a Focus in it.
Very briefly, Focuses are pretty broad, non-specific things. Xenobiology, for example, or you have Quantum Mechanics. These are used to increase the Critical Success range of a test.
A Talent is a more specific thing, that has a particular trigger. So in the case of “I Know My Ship,” it triggers when you are trying to find a problem with “your” ship, and it adds an additional d20 (very useful!). But it doesn’t increase the Critical Range, only Focuses do that.
Now, all that stated, I can see an argument for your Focus of “Electro-Plasma Power Systems,” and your Talent of “I Know My Ship” (I think it’s safe to extrapolate that “your ship” in this case includes the Migizi and her shuttlecraft… chances are pretty good you’ve had to run maintenance on this craft a few dozen times!). So the end result you came to (4 successes due to 2 Criticals including your bonus die) is correct. Just wanted to make sure the steps to get there were clear.
Tray is helping with the external scans of the shuttlecraft, not with the medical one on everyone in the ship… which makes sense, you probably wouldn’t need help doing the routine thing, but the strange-new-thing, that you might need help with.
You managed 2 successes that convert directly into Momentum: the group now has Three Momentum you may choose to spend at any time.
EDIT: Ooh, I already forgot Roger got a bonus success: the group has Four Momentum you can spend. Note that there is a hard-cap at 6 Momentum. Any more over that limit is lost.
Aside from a few bruises and one rather nasty looking scrape, the team has come out of the landing in perfect health.
The shuttle’s lights flicker dramatically, but they do remain on. Sensors are out, shields and engines are out, but comms and lights are back, plus limited computer function. The shuttle isn’t in terrible shape, honestly, but it won’t fly again without a few replacement parts, and one of those parts is the connection from the engines to main power.